Today's Featured Rescue is Julius the Bouvier des Flanders (mix). He's approximately 1.5 years old. With a name like Julius, I keep thinking Julius Caesar ... I wondered if that's who he was named
for but couldn't find any info that might suggest this.
This is one of the longest descriptions of an animal I've seen on Petfinder ... it's very informative but it loses points with the organization. The comment about his 110% beauty quotient also lost points (pictures can say a thousand words, no?). I'd like to see the thoughts grouped together in some sort of logical pattern rather than random sentences about the dog. The pictures are great though - and they earn points for that.
Overall, this ad gets 3/3 for pictures, 3/4 for information and 1/3 for organization ... that's a total of 7 out of 10. Not bad but not great.
Pet Advertisement scoring system
10 points
3 for pictures
__________ 1 for more than one picture
__________ 1 for different angles of animal (I don't want to see two identical pictures!)
__________ 1 for good picture quality
4 for information
__________ 1 for information
__________ 1 for quantity
__________ 1 for quality
__________ 1 for no fluffy bunny crap
3 for organization
__________ 1 for easy to read
__________ 1 for grouping your thoughts logically
__________ 1 for the reader being able to pull necessary information out of the ad
3 comments:
Well, Julius and those beautiful amber eyes get a 10 to the 10th power! He is a real cuttie. I hope he finds a loving family to take him home for the holidays. I wish I could bring home a bundle of furry joy, but it would be irresponsible right now. The baby would spent too much time alone. Sigh.
Great post! It doesn;t hurt that there's a bouv involved, either (on my top top favorite list!, send him to dirtville!)
I post ads for a couple of shelters, it's great to see it broken down like that.
I've also been searching for a companion dog for Stumpy and the number of ads that TOTALLY suck, is astronomical. Now in the case of a Bouv, if the ad wasn't great, I'd probably call. Nine times out of ten, though, for the basic dog that might be a good match for Stumpy, I'm not going to call unless the ad has everything I need to know, up front.
Thanks for this, by the way.
Hey, but what if you do have a fluffy bunny??
Kidding.
Good luck, Julius, I love his "I'm a nice guy" expression. Great dogs!
Good luck.
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